When I Went to Blackpool

my mouth dropped

when my auntie took me on valhalla

my eyes closed

my heart bumping

my belly rumbling

as the boat went down backwards

 when i opened my eyes

all i could see was black

 and dogs barking

my sister screaming

when i got out

i felt like a rock on the floor that can not move unless someone pushes it

i was happy and scared

the air around me was like i was in the middle of a block of ice

and my teeth were chattering

my legs shaking

and i could not move

 i was wet and soggy

there was no-one there to help me

i waited till i was dry

then i staggered off