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KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK EVERYONE...THERE ARE SOME FANTASTIC POEMS ON THE SITE NOW.

Read through your own work, and check all the comments made about anything you have sent.  Then post another reply with any changes.  I want to hear from you.  You can always copy the poems from your page into a Word file, alter them, and then send the new version  back to me...thanks...Peter

Give this page time to load, because there is more here than it looks.......  Scroll down the page to get the most recent comments.  Please take time to read other people's work and comment on it.  Remember you can send comments or drafts by e-mail if you prefer not to have them open to everyone, or if you want to lay the poem out properly.

Starting out... Peter WW 19 Oct 2003

Re: Starting out... joshua (sh) 26 Nov 2003

Re: Starting out... joshua (sh) 26 Nov 2003

Re: Starting out... Peter 03 Dec 2003

Sorry Noorul 20 Oct 2003

Re: Sorry khadija 20 Oct 2003

Re: Sorry yasia 11 Nov 2003

Re: Sorry Yasir [GH] 23 Oct 2003

Re: Sorry Aisha(GHS) 23 Oct 2003

Re: Sorry Shamima  (GHS) 23 Oct 2003

Re: Sorry Peter 02 Nov 2003

Re: Sorry joshua(sh) 26 Nov 2003

Re: Sorry joshua(sh) 26 Nov 2003

Park View Team Ten Peter WW 20 Oct 2003

Snow Sahira 23 Oct 2003

Re: Snow Peter 23 Oct 2003

Re: Snow Shi(SH) 24 Oct 2003

Re: Snow Peter 02 Nov 2003

This is to say........ Aisha Bi (Golden Hillock) 23 Oct 2003

Re: This is to say........ LOZ (SHELDON HEATH) 24 Oct 2003

Re: This is to say........ Peter 09 Nov 2003

My happiest day. Shamima (from Golden Hillock.) 23 Oct 2003

Re: My happiest day. Aisha(GHS 23 Oct 2003

Re: My happiest day. Jonathan Davidson 30 Oct 2003

Re: My happiest day. Peter 09 Nov 2003

Re: My happiest day. 01 Dec 2003

The Happiest Day Shuma Begum (Golden Hillock School) 23 Oct 2003

Re: The Happiest Day Peter 13 Nov 2003

when i went to blackpool yasir ghs 23 Oct 2003

Re: when i went to blackpool paul  24 Oct 2003

poem my spaghetti. sameena, Gholden hillock 23 Oct 2003

Re: poem my spaghetti. paul (sh) 24 Oct 2003

I want Jim back sanam [GHS] 23 Oct 2003

Re: I want Jim back sanam 23 Oct 2003

Re: I want Jim back sanam [ghs] 23 Oct 2003

Re: I want Jim back Shi(SH) 24 Oct 2003

Re: I want Jim back paul (sh) 24 Oct 2003

when my neice was born sahira begum[ghs] 23 Oct 2003

Re: when my neice was born Peter 05 Nov 2003

my birthday party habib hussain G.H.S 23 Oct 2003

Re: my birthday party Peter 05 Nov 2003

Mean Rukhsaar Hussain 23 Oct 2003

Re: Mean Peter 02 Nov 2003

Don't call me the wrong name! Shuma Begum (Golden Hillock School) 23 Oct 2003

Re: Don't call me the wrong name! Peter 02 Nov 2003

Being A Victim Huram Aziz GHS 23 Oct 2003

Re: Being A Victim paul (sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: Being A Victim Shi(SH) 24 Oct 2003

Re: Being A Victim Peter 02 Nov 2003

When i finished the quran khouzair zaman 23 Oct 2003

Re: When i finished the quran Peter 03 Nov 2003

Article 66 Khouzair zaman 24 Oct 2003

Sorry Joshua [SH] 24 Oct 2003

Re: Sorry Shiro 24 Oct 2003

Re: Sorry Peter 05 Nov 2003

I'm SORRY Shiro (SH) 24 Oct 2003

Re: I'm SORRY chris[sh] 24 Oct 2003

Re: I'm SORRY 05 Nov 2003

Re: I'm SORRY loz (sh) 26 Nov 2003

Re: I'm SORRY loz (sh) 26 Nov 2003

Re: I'm SORRY Peter 03 Dec 2003

Im sorry paul jones(sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: Im sorry Shiro (SH) 24 Oct 2003

Re: Im sorry Peter 09 Nov 2003

FEAR joshua(sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: FEAR paul jones(sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: FEAR paul jones(sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: FEAR loz (sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: FEAR chris[sh] 24 Oct 2003

I'm SORRY Shiro (SH) 24 Oct 2003

Re: I'm SORRY 24 Oct 2003

Re: I'm SORRY LOZ(SH) 24 Oct 2003

The dark run down alley. Laurence (Sheldon Heath School) 24 Oct 2003

Re: The dark run down alley. joshua(sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: The dark run down alley. Shi(SH) 24 Oct 2003

Re: The dark run down alley. chris[sh] 24 Oct 2003

Re: The dark run down alley. vivien 24 Oct 2003

Re: The dark run down alley. Jonathan Davidson 30 Oct 2003

Re: The dark run down alley. Peter 03 Nov 2003

sorry chris powell [sh] 24 Oct 2003

Re: sorry Shi(SH) 24 Oct 2003

Re: sorry loz (SH) 24 Oct 2003

Re: sorry Peter 09 Nov 2003

im sorry 8hk 24 Oct 2003

sorry poem stacy(sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: sorry poem Peter 09 Nov 2003

THE DAY I WHENT TO MANSON MECHEL joshua(sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: THE DAY I WHENT TO MANSON MECHEL loz (sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: THE DAY I WHENT TO MANSON MECHEL Jonathan Davidson 30 Oct 2003

Re: THE DAY I WHENT TO MANSON MECHEL Peter 03 Nov 2003

sorry poem Samantha (sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: sorry poem 09 Nov 2003

Re: sorry poem Peter 09 Nov 2003

the day i went to walsall illuminations chris[sh] 24 Oct 2003

Re: the day i went to walsall illuminations vivien[sh] 24 Oct 2003

Re: the day i went to walsall illuminations vivien 07 Nov 2003

Re: the day i went to walsall illuminations Peter 09 Nov 2003

Scared Woman Shiro (SH) 24 Oct 2003

Re: Scared Woman loz (SH) 24 Oct 2003

Re: Scared Woman Peter 09 Nov 2003

Im sorry becky(sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: Im sorry Peter 09 Nov 2003

When my baby brother was born Shenola(SH) 24 Oct 2003

lost becky(sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: lost Peter 09 Nov 2003

Sorry Shenola(SH) 24 Oct 2003

Re: Sorry chris[sh] 07 Nov 2003

Re: Sorry chris[sh] 07 Nov 2003

Re: Sorry Peter 09 Nov 2003

my happy day dancing compition stacy(sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: my happy day dancing compition Peter 09 Nov 2003

When i went to Canada Samantha (SH) 24 Oct 2003

Re: When i went ot Canada Peter 09 Nov 2003

the day i scored my first goal tim  (sheldon heath) 24 Oct 2003

Re: the day i scored my first goal Peter 09 Nov 2003

SORRY Laurence  (Sheldon Heath School) 24 Oct 2003

Re: SORRY chris[sh] 24 Oct 2003

environment chris[sh] 24 Oct 2003

Re: environment Peter 09 Nov 2003

expressing my feelings stacy(sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: expreesing my feelings Peter 09 Nov 2003

forturventura becky (sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: forturventura Peter 09 Nov 2003

my feelings tim  (sheldon heath) 24 Oct 2003

Re: my feelings Peter 09 Nov 2003

Racism Samantha (SH) 24 Oct 2003

Message to the Golden Hillock Group Peter 24 Oct 2003

Note to everyone at Sheldon Heath Peter 24 Oct 2003

to peter stacy  24 Oct 2003

Enjoy half-term Peter 24 Oct 2003

me and my friend jenny stacy(sh) 24 Oct 2003

Re: me and my friend jenny Peter 09 Nov 2003

When I wake up in the morning Daniel (Park View) 05 Nov 2003

Article 110 Arif 05 Nov 2003

Re: Article 110 daniel h 11 Nov 2003

Re: Article 110 danial 11 Nov 2003

PS1 zubair 05 Nov 2003

Re: PS1 loz 07 Nov 2003

english becky(sh) 07 Nov 2003

I am sorry laurence SH 07 Nov 2003

Im sorry joshua(sh) 07 Nov 2003

guess my pet henna(sh) 07 Nov 2003

what is my pet shenola(SH) 07 Nov 2003

Re: what is my pet Peter 09 Nov 2003

Midnight Shiro(SH) 07 Nov 2003

Re: Midnight Peter 09 Nov 2003

Re: Midnight Arif (PVS) 11 Nov 2003

guess my pet becky(sh) 07 Nov 2003

Re: guess my pet 26 Nov 2003