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From: Peter
Date: 09 Nov 2003
Time: 16:34:15 -0000
Remote Name: 82.36.156.71
Loz is right, this is very good indeed. Its on the site now, so read it through. I think the tenses need changing [i mean some of it is in the past, 'he said' etc, and some is in the present 'a man comes up to her'....] What do you think? Send me any changes...