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From: Peter
Date: 09 Nov 2003
Time: 16:30:21 -0000
Remote Name: 82.36.156.71
This is a great thing to write about, and you sum up really well what you did. I've written it on the site. Two things you may think about adding to it...a little more describing [the colours, the noises, thedetails...] and perhaps more about how you felt...let me know any changes. [The Punch and Judy man at the Illuminations is a friend of mine, so I am going to tell him you wrote a poem about him! I think he will be really pleased]