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From: Peter
Date: 09 Nov 2003
Time: 16:17:31 -0000
Remote Name: 82.36.156.71
I have copied this to the website, Chris...but it isn't finished, if you ask me. I really like the idea of a baby with a rattlesnake. It makes you interested to see what this is really about, but then I don't like the last line. Try and decide exactly what the picture is or the story is behind the poem. It may only need one more line to explain, or it may need lots. Send me a message with ideas for change.