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From: Peter
Date: 05 Nov 2003
Time: 19:22:05 -0000
Remote Name: 82.36.156.71
This is a wonderful moment to write about Sahira. I think you could make this into a really fantastic poem. Could you think about it...where do you want the lines to end....what could you leave out, or put in to make sure we really feel what you are feeling when we read it? Do you want to suggest some changes, before I put it on your page?