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From: Peter
Date: 03 Nov 2003
Time: 08:40:57 -0000
Remote Name: 82.36.156.71
Obviously people really like your poem, Loz! I do too. I think a run down alley, is a really wonderful phrase. An alley that people have run down, an alley to run down, running down it, itlooks shabby and run down...... I have put it on the website. Only one question from me. Do you think the words in the last line should be given a line each?