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From: Peter
Date: 03 Nov 2003
Time: 07:40:10 -0000
Remote Name: 82.36.156.71
I tried to correct your name, but once it is there, it is dificult to edit. I have put your poem on the website. Look at it and see what you think. Have I put the line-endings in the right place? Does it give the right picture of how you felt?