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Date: 02 Nov 2003
Time: 21:53:10 -0000
Remote Name: 82.36.156.71
Huram, this is really good. Shiro from Sheldon asks a good question...did this happen to you? If it did, then you have given a good sense of how it felt, if it did not, then you must have imagined it well for peoiple to be asking you that question. I think it is good, but not quite a 'poem' yet. I have copied it onto the website. Have a look at it there, and let me know if the lines are broken in the right places, or if there is anything else you want to change.