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From: Peter
Date: 02 Nov 2003
Time: 21:10:53 -0000
Remote Name: 82.36.156.71
So, Noorul, people seem to like your simple poem, and everyone thinks it is funny, which is great. Some suggest it is too short. I think that may be true. I have copied it onto the website, on your page..perhaps you would like to look at it and see what you might add. a second verse? or something that tells us a little more of the story?