Adderley Annyong*

 

Chanting chatterbox children playing like cheetahs racing around

Bustling big busy buildings standing tall like coconut trees

Perfect precious playground, filling with a stampede of children

A great brain of clean clever computers concentrating

Terrible tall teachers moaning,  like horses with sore legs

 

[* 'Annyong hasseyo' means 'hello' in Korean]

 

 

SOME HAIKU POEMS MADE UP BY THE CLASS.....

 

A loud clarinet

It makes a wonderful sound

Like the whooshing wind


 

Poor little Fruda

Unloved by brutal parents

Sobs in the attic

 


 

My cousin Andy

Used to be a shoplifter

Till he broke his back

 

and another class poem...


 

If the moon were a ball in the playground

 

The stars are barking like dogs across the night sky tarmac

Kicking the moon, over the Jupiter swings towards the sun

Surrounded by dark clouds, the space playground is full of life

One comet slides round the helter-skelter rings of Saturn

While Pluto bounces across the milky way

Stars without gravity play slow-motion tig

Until the sun rises, the last owl hoots,

And playtime finishes.

 

AND SOME MORE FANTASTIC POEMS BY MEMBERS OF THE CLASS.......

 

                                           All about me

My name is Umar I like unicorns because in

The film Harry Potter they say they give half

Of your life back

I hate umbrellas because they fly all over

The place

 

 

IF I WAS A  

 

    

 

 

IF I WAS THE SUN

IíLL SHINE ALL DAY

AND GO TO THE SAHARA DESERT

AND MAKE PEOPLE

SWEAT LIKE WATER

AND MAKE THE DESERT SMELL

IíLL TAKE OVER THE MOON

SO HE CANíT COME

 

 

Ken  Grinsell

Ken  is  a  old  man  he  has   one  brother  one  sister.

He   parents  are  dead.

Ken  mother  died  in  world  war  two.

Heís  father  had  a  heart  attack.

Ken  always  stays  sad

 

Melanie

The  day  Melanie  was  four  years  old.

Melanieís  parents  took  her  out  to  her  grand parentís - grave.

They  got  there  soon  and  a  car  from  the  back  hit  Melanieís

Parents.

Melanieís  parents  died  in  the  accident.

She  got  mad  and  turned  to  a  witch.

She  did  magic  spells  on  the   people  how killed  her  parents.

 

Ken Grinsell life

Ken was evacuated he went to a village. The foster parents wear very nice they cooked all sorts of food.

Kenís mum phoned and said there is no bombing going on so it is safe for ken to come back.

Ken was very happy also sad. As soon as they came back the booming started.

Salena Kabal

 

 

 

A DISCRIPTION ABOUT TANYA 

Her name is Tanya.She has blue eyes, she wears a long gold dress. She is 15 years old, she is a teenager, and sometimes she feels sad, sometimes happy

Tanya is a princess, her mum is nasty, and her dad is loving and caring he brings her everything she wants her dad brings her.

She has 2 nephews 2 nieces and her sister had got married.

 

Salena Kabal class 5w

 

 

 

Zoe 

 


 

Zoe was a young girl 13 years old she had a lovely family. She had something special about her she was a princess, with beautiful gold hair which as smooth as silk, she loved Dolphins and swimming so her father bought her a swimming pool and a dolphin she named her Silky because she was as silky as soap. She herself lived in a huge, beautiful palace with her father Jack, mother Catherine and her sister Becky. Zoe loved playing with her sister because she was 18 and knew more games than her. She was very a happy princess, she was also very popular because she was very intelligent, she had good manners, she was very pretty and of course she was a princess, Zoe loved being a princess except for one thing she didnít quite feel that she deserved to be a princess.

Done

By

Aneeba

Iqbal

 

 

about Melanie

 

 

 

 

 


 

Once upon a time there was a girl called Melanie and she was not very rich. One day she was very hungry and she went in the kitchen and saw two ladies outside in the garden and they had a broom in there hand, black hat. When she opened the window she recognised they were staring at her then she slammed the window her mother said why did you slammed the window for, but Melanie said I saw two witches outside but her mother said I cant see any witches can you. So her mother chucked her out of the house. She founded a new  house and lived happy ever after  

By

Saleena Hussain

 

Menorlay

One day there was a girl named Menoraly was walking on the path and a blind person  was walking on the road a car curved because of the blind person and the car crashes into Menorlay and Menorlay was terrified and the driver was shocked Menorlay was in the hospital and her frost parents came and the doctor said donít worry nothings wrong it is just one problem her frost parents said what she has got no legs and she has broken her arm her frost parents said itís ok because they never cared about her Menorlay heard them and she hated them and she was sad.  

 

                                               Melanie

Melanie felt very sad when her parent got her out of the house.

She buyed her own big castle. Melanie had a accident and broke one hand and both legs.

She put on fake wooden legs to walk she has good personality she wanted to make friends with some girls in her school. The girls didnít want to be her friend because she was a witch. Melanie came back home and thought why did my parents chuck me out of the house because I am a witch thatís right. She had long gold hair & she was 13 years old. Melanie felt to cry when she left her parent she never cried because she didnít want to cry front of her parents.   

 

    

 

 

 

MELENNIE MARLAY.


ONCE UPON A TIME THEIRE WERE TWO WICKED CLEVER WITCHES AND THEIRE NAMES WERE MESHALL AND MELENIE AND THEY HAD A FOSTER MOTHER WHO WAS GOOD AND HER NAME WAS MELISA AND SHE DID NOT KNOW THAT MESHALL AND MELENNIE WERE WITCHES UNTIL ONE DAY MESHALLS FRIEND FROM SCHOOL CAME AND WAS BEING NASTIE TO MELENNIE AND MELENNIE  TURNED MELISAS FRIEND INTO A FROG.THATíS WHEN MELISSA [THEIRE MOTHER ] FOUND OUT THAT MELENIE AND MESHALL WERE WITCHES THEIRE MOTHER GOT SO ANGRY AND SHE WAS BEING CRUEL.

 

 

                      Melanie

Melanie has good manners and has frost parents because she got hit out of the for

Being cruel to her brother she has only one hand and two feet and has

A nice big castle and she had many accident and has broke

Her legs and arms she has fake wooden and she wants to make friends but they

Donít like her she has long golden hair.

 

 

 

If I was a bird I would fly over the moon,

If I was rich Iíll give money to poor,

If I was a monkey I would eat all the bananas.

 

 

 

Melanie 

 

 


 

She has got good personality & has got fostered parents. She has got 1 blue eye & 1 red & she has got 1 leg & 1 arm she has got a wooden leg. She has got green hair she has been thrown out her house because she use to mass about. She is a witch and she tries to make friends but instead of making friends she makes frogs.

 

If I was a monkey

I would race through the jungle

Searching for bananas

But I would not loose

But I love searching through the jungle

Searching for bananas

 

Annyong hasseyo

My name is Saleena

I hate singing

But I enjoy playing a saxophone

My name is Saleena

I am not stupid like a super man

 

 

 

 

hello


My name is Suria,

 

I am good at music and songs,

I like singing,

I am perfect, kind and sweet,

I am like a bird squeaking.

 

 

 

 

  hellow   Hello  my   name  is  mariam  I  love margin   I  like  mango  I  love   music  instrument  I  love  mosques  I  like  monkeys   I  love   mum  I  like   mm   I  love  myself .

 

My    name     is        TOSEEF     I     like     train

My     name    is        TOSEEF     I    like    tiger 

I   em          a       tv

I   like      ps2

I    like    X  BOX

 

 

 

Anyong Hassayo                                               

 

 

My name is Akash I like apples

 And I am like action man I am

Also a very antique person.

 

 

 

 

Annyong Hasseyo

 

My name is Aneeba,

And I like the month of August,

I have a good attitude,

Amazing Aneeba is always annoyed.

 

 

 

 

hello
  

 

My name is ARIF and

I like driving aeroplane

I like eating apples

I like big ants

I like little animals

I like action man

 

 

 

 

 

 A POEM ABOUT ME!!!!!

 

Annyong Hasseyo

My name is Salena,

I am so sweet,

I like sea horses,

I like swimming,

I like the month of September

I like been silly

I like been a star

 

 

My name is

My name is Ahsan Riaz

I like green apples

I have lots of favourite animals

I am amazing Ahsan

I am like action man.

 I like driving a Aston Martin.

 

MY NAME IS RAMZAN

I LIKE PLAYING THE PIANO

IT CHEERS ME UP

BUT I HATE THE COLOUR RED

IT CRUCKES ME UP

I HATE THE RAIN

IT MAKES ME

SHIVER

DONE BY RAMZAN!

 

 

                                        If I was

If I was a sun I would go to space & demolish 

The moon & I would burn people and I would

Never  go away

 

 

A POEM ALL ABOUT ME

 

My name is Sadia

And I like singing

And I like swimming

In the swimming pool.

Annyong Hasseyo

 

 

 

 

Melanie + Michelle 


 

Once upon a time there were two witches, wicked witches.

There names were Michelle Rachel Owen + the smallest

Sisters name was Melanie Owen.

They had a foster mother called Melissa Preston.

She was cruel but very clever + intelligent.

She was the most prettiest + most popular girl in the whole country.

One day the two sisters were so jealous they made a potion to be very pretty +clever.

So they drank the potion + they turned so pretty they were even prettier than there     

By
   Azmeth Ara
                5wFoster mother, everyone thought they were pretty + so they lived happily ever after.      

 

 

 

 

 

 

My name is zakhia

I like going to the zoo.

I like playing xylophones.

I like zebras.

Annyong  hasseyo.

 

    In Halloween town there was a girl called Melanie.

    She was a good witch she kills demons who are trying

    To destroy Halloween town.

     Her parents died  in  a  car  ascendant   someone   had   to

     Look after her.

She was very sad and upset she even felt lonely.

 Then she fell in love with a man then she got married.

By  nadia.

 

Annyong   Hasseyo 

 

 


 

My  name  is  Nadia,

I  like  nuts,

My  name  is  Nadia,

My  lips  are  red  as  roses,

My  name  is   Nadia,

My  eyes  are  green  as  grass.

My  name  is  Nadia,

My  hair  is   black   as  the  sky,

My  name  is  Nadia,

Iím  a  chatter  box,

My  name  is  Nadia,

Iím  very   naughty.

 

 

If I was a big ear in North Africa

I would be in the park on the swings

I would able to hear the pyramids and

Hear the elephants growling and the sound in the

Sahara desert whooshing trough the palm trees.

 

 

 

 

if  i   was 


 

If     I   was  a     tree

I   would   grow   leaves

To  make  apples   to   eat 

And  I  will  grow  apples

And  they  full

 

 

If I was

 

 

 

If I was the moon

Id glow night and day

When ever a planet hits me

I will make them pay.

.If I was a cheater

Id run as fast I can

Id catch some thing

And wish it was a man.

 

 

If I was

If I was a moon I would be a happy

Girl because I would be in the sky.

If I was a star I would be really

happy because I would be shining

In the sky and people would say

look at that beautiful star.

If I was a ant I would not be

To happy because everyone

Would kill me.

If I was a board I would not

Be happy because everyone

Would write on me.

But I am not these things

I am a humanbean..

Sadia

 

 

IF I WAS A SUN

I WILL SWEAT PEOPLES HEAD OFF

I WILL BURN THEM ALIVE

I WILL MELT THE WHOLE CITY

I WILL BREAK DOWN THE LEY BUILDING

IF I WAS A LION

I WILL SCARE EVERYONE AWAY

I WILL EAT THEM TOO

I WILL MESS THE CITY UP

 

 

 

if i  were  elephant                                  

 

I  would  have  be  in   the   jungle    and  brake   all  the    trees

And   eat   the    leaves 

And   break  the   ground   and   drink    all   the   water

In     the    universe

 

 

 

 

IF I WERE AN ANT 

 

 


 

If I was an ant,

I would have a very hard life.

I would be squashed by a

person, car, train, or an animal.

I would be the smallest animal in the world.

 

But still no-one will be able to

See me eating.

I could always nibble peopleís food away.

After I have ate I would say

YUMMY YUMMY

For my

TUMMY!!!

 

I am the bestest

I am the saddest

At the same time.

 

 

 

If I was a Lion

I will crush the whole city

& It will melt down.

I would tickle, giggle

& Laugh loud & be proud.

 

 

If I was a baby

I would be able to relax

And sleep all day long

With none to disturb me

No school to go to

No work to do

What a great life it would be

I can imagine sleeping all day long

Everybody would have to look after me because I would be so small

And I could get hurt quickly because I was so delicate

Done by Aneeba Iqbal

 

 

If I was a sun I would shine away,

Making people hot,

If I was a moon I will glow every where  in the sky,

If I was a cheater I will race through the  jungle,

 

 

 

The 2 Witches 

 


 

Once upon a time there were two witches. They had a foster mother called Mallisa and the two witchesí names were Meshel and Mellany. Their foster mother was very kind to them. There foster Mother was not rich and didnít know that Meshel and Mellany were witches. So every night when there foster mother went to sleep , they got on there brooms and sometimes stole the food from the shop because they were too sleepy.

 

By

Marjana.

 

 

Hello                                     

 

 

My name is Modud and

I like motorbikes.

I like mysterious magic.

I like being max steel